My poems are weak, is that your critique?


Statement cuts deep to my core


Does my expressions lack in technique?


Pleased by my craft, Damn, I was so sure


Hasn’t one shown emotions I beseech?


Tried so hard to work on my décor


Or could I’ve written them in Greek?


Intensity I thought you once adore


Didn’t you ever think I was unique?


Thought you would be the wind in which I soar

© 2007