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My poems are weak, is that your critique?

 

Statement cuts deep to my core

 

Does my expressions lack in technique?

 

Pleased by my craft, Damn, I was so sure

 

Hasn’t one shown emotions I beseech?

 

Tried so hard to work on my décor

 

Or could I’ve written them in Greek?

 

Intensity I thought you once adore

 

Didn’t you ever think I was unique?

 

Thought you would be the wind in which I soar

© 2007

 

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